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The Divide--Audition 1by ~Lady-Moth

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~Tofubeast Nov 16, 2012

I like the bottom two panels, but the top two look really unfinished as they don't have the same level of polish that the bottom two have. The knight could have more background detail and shading/texture under his feet, and it'd work. I'd also suggest separating the top two panels with some form of paneling like the bottom two panels, to keep it consistent.

Watch the tangents with the knight's hand in the middle panel, and the missing bottom lines in the scrolls.

Aside from that, this is coming along well. You seem to be working more on your poses, and the storybook style is working out for you.

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